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Writer's pictureDani Clifton

A Bloody Good Time: the Art of Crafting Horror.

In the world of storytelling, there are few genres that possess the power to raise our pulse and have us seeking refuge under the covers quite like horror. The art of crafting horror can be a bloody good time that involves placing fear at the core of your narrative. It’s an art that ensnares readers within a dark web of dread and morbid fascination. It hinges on skillful pacing and the subtle seeding of hints and clues throughout to maintain a constant sense of impending doom.


Creepy hands crawling out of the mysterious mire

A well-crafted horror story has the ability to tap into our deepest fears, and evoke a visceral reaction in us. It can leave us sleepless, doubting the shadows in the corner of the room, and questioning every bump in the night. But what elements do we need to combine to create that perfect blend of obscurity and fear?


The most successful horror stories are set in locations that are inherently creepy. Imagine a quiet, seemingly idyllic suburbia where strange and terrifying events start taking place, or a desolate lighthouse overlooking a stormy sea; maybe a remote cabin set in the howling wilderness, cut off from civilization. Set your story with vivid and dark descriptions to create truly horrifying and disturbing imagery. Perhaps something like, “Deep in the heart of the dense, dark forest, a lone cabin stood shrouded in mystery. The trees around it stood like sentinels, their twisted, gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers. Red eyes glowed from the windows of the cabin, watching; waiting.” Establish a shadowy ambiance and put the reader right there inside the story. Raise their pulse, and dare them to turn the page…

Now that the stage is set and your readers are double-checking their doors and windows, you’re going to need a relatable protagonist. Develop a main character who experiences both fear and vulnerability. This allows your readers to emotionally connect with the character’s struggles.


Take for example, Ellen Ripley from the “Alien” franchise. Ripley’s an ordinary woman thrown into extraordinary, terrifying circumstances as she fights to survive the Alien threat, but it’s her resilience, determination, and will to survive against all odds that truly connects with the audience. Create a main character readers can recognize aspects of themselves in, one that they want to root for.


Opposite your protagonist, you’ll need to create a formidable and menacing antagonist who instills fear, and poses a significant threat to your main character. Your antagonist should be a complex character with well-defined motives that you slowly reveal to the reader. The conflict between your antagonist and protagonist should be central to the story. Whether it’s a virus, deadly aliens, or a sewer-dwelling clown, your antagonist should have the power to tap into the deepest, and most primal fears of your characters and readers alike.


Conflict is the essence of storytelling, serving as the testing ground for your characters, and creating tension and suspense. Whether it’s physical peril or psychological distress, these struggles keep readers on the edge of their seats, especially when crucial information is purposefully withheld. This approach allows readers’ imaginations to flirt with fearsome possibilities. By incorporating these elements, you craft a horror story that leaves an enduring chill in readers’ minds, persisting long after the book is closed.


Engage with fear; what can neither your protagonist, nor your readers see? What are they not yet aware of? Fear of the unknown is a universal element that presents an excellent opportunity to build suspense. Capitalize on the unease of the unseen and the misunderstood, leaving gaps for the readers’ imaginations to fill. Do it right, and you’ll have your audience up and illuminating the entire house! Consider the eerie rustling and snarls of unseen creatures in a dark forest, or the discordant refrain of whispers emanating from the bowels of a centuries-old house known to be haunted. Imagine unseen eyes tracking your protagonist’s every move, or an icy voice whispering threats in their ear. Exploit the things that induce cold sweats and nightmares, then transfer that sense of anxiety onto your readers.


Graphic and disturbing imagery can also be used to shock and unsettle readers, but use them sparingly, and try not to rely on it solely for shock. Personally, I find psychological horror to be much more effective at creating that sense of foreboding. Try exploring themes that deal with paranoia, insanity, or the supernatural to tap into readers’ psychological fears and angsts. For me, nothing can illicit a physical response, make me squirm like the theme of being trapped in a repeating circumstance (Groundhog’s Day), or worse, being trapped in a repeating cycle, but one that I am unaware of (Twilight Zone).


Of course, the presence of evil often takes center stage in horror stories. Whether in the form of malevolent characters, or ominous external forces, these manifestations of evil cast a dark shadow that looms over the story, instilling a profound sense of terror and unease in the reader. It’s these malevolent characters who personify the darkest facets of humanity, reflecting our collective fears and moral anxieties.


Death, blood, and gore also play vital roles in intensifying the reader’s visceral and emotional response to a story. These elements transform the narrative into a sensory experience that taps into readers’ primal fears. The portrayal of death and the graphic depiction of gore shock the senses, and often provoke a discomforting reaction in the reader. This visceral response becomes an integral part of the reader’s engagement with the story, drawing them into the terrifying world you’ve created, and making the experience all the more haunting and unforgettable.


The crescendo of your horror story hinges on the masterful buildup to the intense climactic moment your protagonist confronts their deepest fears, and faces the ultimate threat. This pivotal juncture is the culmination of the suspense and dread you’ve been building. Give your reader the nerve-wracking climax that they’ve been anxiously anticipating. In this intense moment of terror, your story’s most significant and disturbing revelations should surface, packing an emotional wallop.


Following your spine-chilling climax, you’ll need a satisfying resolution. It’s in this closing act that you’ll either ties up loose ends and offer a sense of closure for your reader, or you might teasingly leave unanswered questions that linger in their mind. A well-crafted resolution ensures that your audience walks away from the story with a sense of fulfillment, or leaves room for potential sequels, ensuring that the horrors they’ve encountered are far from over.


In the art of crafting a truly captivating horror story, the presence of evil, the visceral elements of death and gore, the climactic confrontation of fears, and the resolution that follows all blend together to create an unsettling experience that lead the reader into the depths of the unknown. As we close the book on these tales of horror, we’re left with a lingering sense of unease that keeps us coming back for more. So next time you’re huddled beneath the covers, breathlessly engrossed in that tale of terror, just remember…it’s just a story.


Or is it...?

~Dani

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