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Writer's pictureDani Clifton

Writing From Multiple POVs

Consider a murder mystery where you, the reader, are privy to the emotions of the victim, the thoughts of the detective, and inner drive of the killer. Suddenly, the story becomes a complex tapestry of motivations, secrets, and twists. By weaving the inner lives of these key players together, the author invites the reader on a journey through the crime from multiple lenses. We witness the victim’s final moments, we get a glimpse into their fears, regrets, and maybe even get a hint of their killer.


As we see the case unfold through the detective’s eyes, we get flashes of insight. Most interestingly, we get a chilling, intimate view inside the murderer’s mind and experience the twisted justifications and simmering motives behind their heinous act. It’s at these intertwining viewpoints that the audience is drawn into an immersive tale, piecing together the puzzle alongside the characters who each hold a piece of the truth.


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Writing from multiple perspectives involves narrating a story through the eyes and experiences of various characters. This approach to storytelling gives readers a deeper understanding of your story by revealing the unique thoughts, emotions, and motivations of each character involved.


By shifting perspectives, writers highlight the nuances of interpersonal relationships, conflicting desires, and varying interpretations of events. This can enhance the tension in your conflicts, develop character depth, and really hook your audience. In this blog I’ll explore various points of view (POVs) and delve into the unique aspects of each. Let’s dive in and examine what makes them distinct and how they can be effectively used.


Crafting distinct character voices is crucial when integrating multiple perspectives into your narrative. Every character must resonate with a voice that’s uniquely their own, shaped by their personal history, temperament, and encounters with life. This distinctiveness is crucial—it’s what enables readers to instantly recognize who’s at the narrative helm. Crafting these individual voices not only enriches your characters but also enhances the reader’s journey.


Multiple perspectives can enrich your storytelling by layering depth and complexity into the narrative. By showing events through the eyes of different characters, you highlight how personal biases, emotions, and experiences shape what they see as truth. This approach makes readers think twice about accepting just one character’s version of a story. It also lets readers get close to what characters feel and think, helping them understand their deepest fears, wants, and reasons for their actions. This connection makes everything that happens in the story feel more real and significant.


Writing your story in multiple viewpoints can significantly ramp up suspense by doling out information piece by piece. Each character’s perspective unveils just a sliver of the whole picture, keeping readers hooked as they try to piece together the full story. This process thrives on the slow reveal, where the gradual unfolding of each character’s knowledge leads to a crescendo of tension.


When these perspectives collide or expose conflicting truths, an element of surprise is introduced that can jolt the reader. This clash not only deepens the intrigue, but it makes the reader question what they thought they knew. Having your characters perceive the same event in starkly different ways, adds layers of complexity to your narrative, enhancing the thrill of discovery and the shock of contradiction.


When developing distinct voices for different POVs, tailor each character’s language, syntax, and narrative style to reflect their unique personality, background, and emotional state. Restrict the information each character is privy to, what they see, or experience, to maintain their intimate, subjective perspective. Color their narration with their specific emotions, beliefs, and inspirations that influence how they perceive and interpret events.


When advancing the plot, use POV shifts to define scenes, signal time jumps, location changes, or shifts in narrative focus. When switching between perspectives, you can employ different techniques to navigate smooth transitions. Chapter-by-chapter shifts offer a clear, natural break. These can be chapter titles named after the POV character, distinct formatting, or clear narrative cues such as beginning each chapter with the character’s name indicating whose perspective we’re now following. Scene-level shifts require clear signaling through techniques like paragraph breaks and character action tags. Other options include sensory shifts, direct internal thoughts, narrative interruptions, voice contrasts, or visual text cues. Section breaks divide larger portions of a narrative, often signaling a significant shift in time, perspective, location, or a combination thereof. The primary difference between scene-level and section breaks is in the magnitude and purpose of the POV transition.


Regardless of your method, clear transitions are critical. Such signposts are essential because they guide the reader through the narrative landscape, ensuring they can follow the shifts without getting lost. Without clear transitions, readers might struggle to adjust to the changing viewpoints, disrupting their engagement with the story.


First-person POV, employing “I” and "me," immerses readers in the narrator’s thoughts, feelings, and experiences, placing them alongside the protagonist in real-time. This perspective enhances immediacy and authenticity but restricts the narrative to the protagonist's viewpoint. In my “Death by” thriller series, I utilize first-person POV to portray Samantha Harris, a formidable, witty, and lethal protagonist, allowing readers to intimately experience her world and actions.


Collective first-person point of view narrates the story from the perspective of a group, using the pronoun “we” to convey the shared experiences and thoughts of the collective. This POV creates a sense of shared experience or shared identity, as the narrator speaks for the group as a whole. This is often used to convey the emotions, thoughts, and actions of a community, family, or other unit, providing a unique perspective that emphasizes group dynamics and communal experiences.


Second-person point of view is a unique narrative voice that directly addresses the reader as “you,” placing them in the shoes of the protagonist. This perspective is less common in literature, but when employed effectively, it can create an intensely immersive and interactive experience. It has the power to engage readers by making them an active participant in the story, often evoking a sense of personal involvement and emotional investment.


Third person limited, third person omniscient, and third-person objective differ in several ways. Third-person limited focuses on a single character’s thoughts, feelings, and perceptions, creating intimacy but restricting information to their subjective experience. Third-person omniscient accesses multiple characters’ inner lives, potentially with objective commentary, enriching understanding but risking lost focus and intimacy, and third-person objective observes actions, dialogue, and environment without internal access, fostering realism and distance, ideal for tension or subtle thematic suggestion. The author’s choice depends on balancing mental depth, narrative scope, and reader inference with each approach suited to specific storytelling goals and atmospheres.


An unreliable narrator is a storytelling device where the person telling the story cannot be entirely trusted to tell the truth or provide an accurate, objective account of the events within the narrative. This concept challenges the reader to question the narrative’s validity, and search for the truth between the lines or through other characters’ perspectives. This technique is often used to create suspense, develop complex character studies, or explore themes of truth and perception. Classic examples include the narrator Holden Caulfield in “The Catcher in the Rye” by J.D. Salinger, where his youth and emotional state make us question his reliability, or the deliberately misleading narrators in “Gone Girl” by Gillian Flynn, where the dual perspectives of Nick and Amy showcase intentional deceit.


 An epistolary novel tells a story through a series of documents such as letters, diary entries, emails, newspaper clippings, or other forms of written communication. This form allows the author to give the reader direct access to the characters’ thoughts and feelings without the need for a traditional narrator. It can also create a sense of authenticity and immediacy, as the reader often feels as though they are privy to personal communications and private thoughts. A popular example of an epistolary novel is “The Color Purple” by Alice Walker which tells the story of Celie, a young African American girl in the early 20th century South through her letters to God and to her sister Nettie. These letters span several decades, detailing Celie’s experiences of abuse, love, struggle, and eventual empowerment. The use of letters as the narrative structure allows readers intimate access to Celie's thoughts, emotions, and growth over time.


The stream of consciousness narrative, which depicts the unfiltered flow of a character’s thoughts and feelings, is less commonly utilized but worth mentioning. This style mimics the way thoughts naturally occur, often without clear logic or order, blending memories, sensations, and reflections. Due to its complexity and the challenge it poses for both writers and readers, this POV is more frequently found in modernist literature from the late 19th and early 20th centuries, where writers were experimenting with new ways to express the complexities of the human mind.   

   

Writing from multiple POVs offers a dynamic range of techniques for storytelling, each providing a distinct lens through which a narrative can be experienced. From the intimacy of first person to the expansive vistas of third person omniscient, and the rare but engaging second person, these perspectives can deepen character development, enhance plot complexity, and engage readers on a more personal level. Choosing the right POV is crucial in crafting a compelling story that resonates with readers and brings the world of the narrative to life.


~Dani

 

 

 

 

 

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